There was a calm about him as he walked down the street. It encircled him the way a mother's arm embraced a beloved child. Comforting and protecting. It radiated from his very core. The grace of his step, which seemed to float him over the surface as fluid as a country river. The way he held himself, sure and welcoming at the same time. But most of all were the eyes. Storm grey and as deep as the Delphi. Intellect showing through that seemed to be just as vast. To stare into those eyes would be your unmaking.
But despite his powerful aura, he traveled through the crowds of the town unnoticed. The only sign of his passing was a wake of people who strangely felt, suddenly, as if they had just left the embrace of their one person they could not live without.
Slowly he made his way to the local diner, entered, and sat at a table that was off to the side. The rest of the patrons gave him no more than a passing glance. The waitress took his order and left him to his lunch. Other customers came and went. When he finished, he paid and left. Heading North-West he left the town behind him.
Adam had seen the man when he entered the town. There was something about him that struck Adam as odd, yet he couldn't place it. He decided to follow the man to try to see if he could figure out what it was that had caught his attention. As he made his way after the man, the feeling that something was off continued to grow. At first he didn't catch it, but when they made it into the deeper parts of town, it clicked. No one seemed to register that the strange man was passing them.
This baffled Adam. How could everyone not notice this man who stood out so plainly. But this was only the first odd thing about the man. There was more, otherwise Adam, after figuring out what was weird, would have returned to his games. So he continued to follow the man, straight to the diner. Adam waited a few minutes before entering and sitting at the counter, ordered a glass of milk.
He looked around and again saw that everyone seemed to not realize that the man was there. But as Adam continued to watch everyone, he was startled by what he saw next. Lucy, the bitter woman of seventy years, who always sat alone and never talked to anyone except to berate them for existing, suddenly smiled a toothy grin, and started to talk lively to the newly wed couple one table over. Roel, who had lost his legs in an accident recently, started making jokes about his own demise. And young Ben, who was mad at the waitress for dumping him, got up, walked to the sheriff who was drinking his coffee, and placed the revolver he had hidden in his jacket on the table and quietly left.
Adam knew that the man was the cause for this. He didn't know how, but he felt that these events were connected to him. But there was still something not right. As he turned back to the man to get another look at him he stopped moving. He watched as the man paid. The man pushed back his chair and left. And finally Adam knew what it was. The man produced no sound in anything that he did. The clothes he wore never rustled. The chair he had just seen him scrape across the floor never squeaked a protest against the ceramic tile. The bell on the door never chimed its greeting or salutation.
Adam jumped off the stool and dashed for the door. Yanking it open he heard some people grumble at his hastiness but he was already gone before the first words were out. Quickly he scanned the streets to see where the man went. Adam caught sight of the strange man's pack turn the corner and he raced after it. It continued this way to the edge of the town. The man always just ahead of Adam. And Adam trying to get that much closer. When Adam made it to the town's end, he saw the silent man already quite a ways off. Without a second thought and only a slight pause, Adam stepped past the border of his home and began to follow the man. He watched as the man stepped off the path and headed for an entrance into the small woods that ran parallel to the road, crossing into the shadows of the trees. Adam never quickened his step at this but continued at a steady pace.
That was quite intriguing. The Second Coming, or perhaps an angel, like Clarence in It's A Wonderful Life.
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Interesting take on a angel. I hope he finds someone to keep him company in silence as he brings peace. Welcome to Friday flash.
ReplyDeleteA very intriguing story. It raises many questions, yet it is a satisfying read. Very nice job.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much for your comments. I'm glad you liked it. And I welcome any constructive criticism.
ReplyDeleteThis story raises so many questions, but was a great read as it is.
ReplyDeleteOne thing that I would say is something that has been previously flagged with some of my flash stories: there is some repetition/overlap of ideas in there, and sometimes with flash there is more power in fewer words.
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@Rebecca thank you I will keep that in mind.
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